As i was reading I was writing key points down and this is what I got. 1. Very good first impression based on cover page and introduction. 2. Very informative with your company information, I got a lot out of ready that and feel like I know quite a bit about your company. it feels like you have a good understanding about them. 3. Loved to see the questions you have included into your assignment. I have written a heap of questions down to ask Martin and after seeing the way you have done this, it has reminded me to add those questions into my assignment. 4. Really impressed about how far along you are. 5. Spreadsheet from what I can see is great. I am sorry that I don't really have any constructive feedback for you, I just can't find anything that I would change.
Hi Natasha, you have done such a great job with your draft for assignment one, well done! Your writing style was great for reading, a simple layout but an informative read. I learnt so much about your company, it sounds like you have a great understanding about what they do. Best of luck with your assignment and the rest of the semester (not that it looks like you need it :) Cheers, Kyara
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Hi Natasha,
Great assignment draft!!!!
As i was reading I was writing key points down and this is what I got.
1. Very good first impression based on cover page and introduction.
2. Very informative with your company information, I got a lot out of ready that and feel like I know quite a bit about your company. it feels like you have a good understanding about them.
3. Loved to see the questions you have included into your assignment. I have written a heap of questions down to ask Martin and after seeing the way you have done this, it has reminded me to add those questions into my assignment.
4. Really impressed about how far along you are.
5. Spreadsheet from what I can see is great.
I am sorry that I don't really have any constructive feedback for you, I just can't find anything that I would change.
Hi Natasha, you have done such a great job with your draft for assignment one, well done! Your writing style was great for reading, a simple layout but an informative read. I learnt so much about your company, it sounds like you have a great understanding about what they do. Best of luck with your assignment and the rest of the semester (not that it looks like you need it :) Cheers, Kyara
hi Natasha,
great work. i liked your questions that came to your mind. i never that of those things, you did put the information straight and clear.
i think we all have something to learn from your work. well done.
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