Hi Natasha, Just had a look at your assignment draft and its excellent. Spreadsheet is well set out and easy to read. Its reassuring to see that you are up to a similar point as me in relation to entering your figures. Nothing I can suggest to improve it.
Your reflections on chapter four are short but straight to the point. A few similar points to how i felt when reading it. I liked the questions that you asked with your resolutions as well. Only thing i could suggest for this section is possibly some more personal reflection on situations in your life that the information in chapter four could relate to.
Step 3 for yours is once again easy to read and provides the information required, short but straight to the point.
All up its well done, like i suggest only a minor suggestion would be to elaborate a little more, but thats only a small suggestion.
Hi Natasha Just checked out your draft for assessment 2 and it looks and reads well. You obviously got something out of chapter 4 from what you wrote, even though your summary seemed a bit short. I didn't see any KC's in your assessment either. Just pointing that out as I totally forgot to put them in my SPA #1. Your spreadsheet is set out well. Wow, your company isn't doing too well at all. I hope you get the rest of your figures into your spreadsheet too. Kylie Urquhart
First of all, your financial statements look really great. I didn’t see any questions about it anywhere so I assume that it’s all good. It doesn’t look like you left anything out either. Well done Your title page on your word document is great, good to see that you have put all of the necessary information on there. I had forgotten to do this myself! The opening to your step one, I thought was great. It is extremely honest and exactly how I felt and I bet many others did too. You got straight into talking about the chapter which is great. From here I could already tell that this was going to be interesting to read. I really loved reading through your KCQ’s, they were honest, interesting and just great. Well done, I don’t think anyone will get bored from reading it. Step three is great; you have so much detail here. You have a picture, selling price etc. I can tell that you have gone above and beyond for this section.
Overall, I can’t really fault your assessment two at all! Just a little advice would be to show that you understand chapter four and its concepts a little more in your step one. (A mistake I have made before). Your assignment is looking great! Well done.
Sorry if this didn’t help you a lot, you seem to be on the right track !
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Hi Natasha,
Just had a look at your assignment draft and its excellent. Spreadsheet is well set out and easy to read. Its reassuring to see that you are up to a similar point as me in relation to entering your figures. Nothing I can suggest to improve it.
Your reflections on chapter four are short but straight to the point. A few similar points to how i felt when reading it. I liked the questions that you asked with your resolutions as well. Only thing i could suggest for this section is possibly some more personal reflection on situations in your life that the information in chapter four could relate to.
Step 3 for yours is once again easy to read and provides the information required, short but straight to the point.
All up its well done, like i suggest only a minor suggestion would be to elaborate a little more, but thats only a small suggestion.
Joshua Evans
Hi Natasha
Just checked out your draft for assessment 2 and it looks and reads well. You obviously got something out of chapter 4 from what you wrote, even though your summary seemed a bit short. I didn't see any KC's in your assessment either. Just pointing that out as I totally forgot to put them in my SPA #1. Your spreadsheet is set out well. Wow, your company isn't doing too well at all. I hope you get the rest of your figures into your spreadsheet too.
Kylie Urquhart
First of all, your financial statements look really great. I didn’t see any questions about it anywhere so I assume that it’s all good. It doesn’t look like you left anything out either. Well done
Your title page on your word document is great, good to see that you have put all of the necessary information on there. I had forgotten to do this myself!
The opening to your step one, I thought was great. It is extremely honest and exactly how I felt and I bet many others did too. You got straight into talking about the chapter which is great. From here I could already tell that this was going to be interesting to read. I really loved reading through your KCQ’s, they were honest, interesting and just great. Well done, I don’t think anyone will get bored from reading it.
Step three is great; you have so much detail here. You have a picture, selling price etc. I can tell that you have gone above and beyond for this section.
Overall, I can’t really fault your assessment two at all! Just a little advice would be to show that you understand chapter four and its concepts a little more in your step one. (A mistake I have made before). Your assignment is looking great! Well done.
Sorry if this didn’t help you a lot, you seem to be on the right track !
- Riana Pulfer
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